Many applications ask a version of this familiar prompt: “Describe one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences.” It sounds straightforward, but students often end up summarizing responsibilities or achievements rather than offering genuine insight. You already have a section of the application dedicated to bullet points and awards. This essay is your chance to move beyond the list and show admissions readers the person behind the activity.

One of the most common pieces of advice students hear when writing college essays is “Show, don’t tell.” But what does that actually mean—and how do you do it without sounding dramatic or writing a novel? At Kingfisher Prep, we define great college essays as those that invite the reader into a moment, rather than announce a conclusion. Telling says what happened. Showing lets us feel it.

Move beyond the brochure and write an essay that connects your story to their campus. Learn how to write a “Why This College?” essay that feels personal—not generic. Kingfisher Prep breaks down research, reflection, and writing techniques that show an authentic fit with your dream school.